Woah that’s unreadable.
Give me at least a drop shadow or outline or something. Bold putting white text on yellow and orange backgrounds at 12pt font.
Needs higher-contrast text.
Yeah I messed up, I edited it zoomed in and forgot to check what It was like zoomed out (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻)
It happens. It’s always a learning process. Then you get the flow and things start flyin out good quality.
I really love the hand drawn style and the characters, but you should really try to make the text more readable. It is very hard to read unless you zoom up close with the HD on (am on mobile). Keep it up though would love to see more of this
Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback! Yeah, I really messed up with the text here lol. I’ll get another one out and I’ll actually take the text into consideration a bit more lol