I am a indie dev and YouTuber. I made this video today and I am pretty new to YouTube so I am here to ask feedback about this video! I took your feedback from the last post so I used a text to speech bot this time! Tell me what you think about this video(be honest I am not pretty sensitive but be reasonable in your comments) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=902vugDneDM

  • aqua_cat@pawb.socialEnglish
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    19 days ago

    Watched it all the way trough and these are my honest critics:

    1. ai voice + music makes it feel like someone is talking a bedtime story to me
    2. first two sfx were a bit loud on my headphones so try and normalize the sound
    3. ai voice made all jokes feel dull. You can make that work as a character. For example Fireship makes good videos without raising his voice.
    4. Lastly you could skin the video and put all important stuff into a short under 1 min and if views are what you want that is your best bet imo.

    Edit: and please make exposure lower on thumbnail. That is a tactic to get 5yo to watch the video, and they will click away in first 3 sec. If you want grown ups to click on that video make them know what they’re in for. (if a video is about Enemys and their AI make me know that; if you are chasing semi-sarcastic lazy gem dev persona you can draw some trash drawing in ms paint of red circle with angry face chasing the player on a black bg and name the video for example “Making AI (Arteficial Incompentence) For My Game DEVLOG x” )