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Cake day: March 3rd, 2024

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  • Finished I’m Afraid You’ve Got Dragons by Peter S. Beagle. In general, I think it has pacing and tonal issues (be aware that it’s not cozy all the way through!), but it was also cute in, like, an 80s-YA-fantasy kind of way. I don’t regret reading it, but I think there are better books to recommend.

    Currently reading Fever House by Keith Rosson. I guess I’d call this action horror? There’s a severed hand that makes people near it want to be overly violent, and various players trying to acquire or get rid of it. Fast read, enjoyable so far.





  • I like the idea (and it’s very cute!), but it feels a little busy. I think that could be solved by simplifying the book shape, if you’re down to give that a shot (feel free to ignore me, ofc). Two suggestions to try, not sure if either will work:

    • Get rid of the inner black line and the orange, and use a single black line down the middle for the crease instead. If the book shape isn’t strong enough at that point, you can always try thickening up the edge, or coloring the whole shape.
    • Alternatively, remove the black outline (and the orange fill) entirely (apart from a center book crease), and just have the ears, nose, and whiskers (maybe also eyes?) be a different color. Let the book be the highest contrast shape, so it’s obvious.

    EDIT: Ok, look, I was impatient to see what it could look like, so I did it myself. (I may have gotten a little carried away.)

    An updated version of a logo by @Mem@discuss.tchncs.de, of an orange and white book-faced lemming on a purple-blue background.

    @Mem@discuss.tchncs.de, YOU DID SO GOOD! LOOK HOW CUTE IT IS.


  • Still reading I’m Afraid You’ve Got Dragons by Peter S. Beagle. It’s still light and fluffy fun, but it’s starting to feel kind of muddled. Like, I thought I was getting a story about a dragon catcher that hates his job, but that’s been sidelined in favor of a story about a prince that doesn’t want to rule. There’s been a sprinkle of “legendary dragon? nah, that doesn’t exist anymore” foreshadowing, but the plot’s been very low stakes otherwise. Not sure if it’s a framing issue (there’s a lot of POVs) or a narrative one, but maybe it’ll all come together later on.