• grrgyle@slrpnk.net
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    2 months ago

    I don’t know why I’m surprised at a good poem about such a hmm prosaic? topic, but this is great. Wow yeah, what a picture.

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    1 month ago

    It’s impressive the way this poem uses little techniques to invite you into the head of the narrator, making the final few lines hit hard.